Hustle and bustle all around
Busy men, they pas me by
Not a glance to spare
Honking horns and roaring engines
Interspersed with shouts and laughs
The world around me is alive, a buzz
A cacophony I can stand not
Around that trinity of lights
The road I seek lies ahead
A black stretch of tar in between
A narrow dusty path
No horns, no engines, nor shouts and laughs
Silent the path is, but not really so
The silence of nature
Tranquil nature all around
Little shacks flank the path
green fields stretching to horizon beyond
An old lady, she stares at me
Her eyes, they seem to speak
Pity not, O little lad, poor
I may be, but unhappy I am not, have seldom been
Ive seen the world pass me by
A whirlwind of ecstasy and grief
I regret not, being poor
I am merely glad to have lived
I have as much as I need,
Food, water and roof
And that to me, is as rich as can be
For relative are rich and poor, don’t you agree?
I pass the old lady by,
pondering those unspoken words
The air grows smoky, the stoves are lit
And thick is the air with aroma
Of the simple food of the peasantry
As mouth watering, as any delicacy
A creaking wooden cart nears me
A family going out to the city’s marvels see
Such a wonderful place this path
A world of it’s own
Green fields and humble shacks
A happier place I have never seen
Primitive, and as such delightful
Almost as going back in time
I see the stretch of road and think
Like a time machine of tar…




11 responses so far ↓
Magik Quilter // January 21, 2008 at 12:22 pm |
Congratulations on 100 hits WOW!!!! I am in awe.
Bharat Iyer // January 21, 2008 at 12:34 pm |
Yeah it took 3 weeks+ to get to 100 hits. That wasn’t one day’s figure. I average around 5-6 hits a day.
Vasudha // January 21, 2008 at 2:23 pm |
3 weeks is pretty good for 100 hits when you’ve just started out. And almost half the number in two more days, is… whoa.
Bharat Iyer // January 21, 2008 at 2:53 pm |
I was expecting it to be slower. Commenting on other blogs really helps. I am so pysched about how fast it has hit 160 ^_^
Magik Quilter // January 21, 2008 at 2:55 pm |
Goes to show how much I know!!!!!! But well done anyway. I keep counting my various quilt photos on flickr…….one only has 2 views to make 100….I am very impatient.
Vasudha // January 22, 2008 at 10:54 am |
I missed saying this earlier, but I really liked your poem. Its very fluid, very seamless. And striking
Bharat Iyer // January 22, 2008 at 5:00 pm |
Thanks.
cjwriter // January 23, 2008 at 7:41 am |
Beautiful poem, Bharat. I love it. It feels very haunting, particularly the way you alternate the length of the stanzas… kind of reminds me of a scene in a post apocalyptic novel, as the protagonist looks out at the world… be interested to read the story behind it.
I was going to say congrats on the 100 hits too, but looks like you’re over 200 now! You’ll be up over 1000 before you know it.
Bharat Iyer // January 23, 2008 at 7:46 am |
CJ: // particularly the way you alternate the length of the stanzas//
Lol, that was an accident. I am not entirely familiar yet with WordPress formatting interface. When I break a line, it skips a line in the posting area but appears right below the earlier line when published. And thanks, this is a special poem. The story is nothing very incredible really. And yeah 232 hits, I am super-psyched!
Stranger // July 18, 2008 at 5:53 am |
Je t’aime ton poem. C’est tres belle! (It means I love your poem, it’s very beautiful)
Bharat Iyer // July 24, 2008 at 6:33 pm |
Stranger: Gee, thanks!
By the way, what is that, French?