Apples
cartloads, oranges
cartons
Trucker
60 kmph
Crash, bang
onomatopoeia
Motherfucker
watch the road
Get outta the way
asshole
You’ll pay for these
Sure
jackass
Push and shove
Siren
Trucker
60kmph
on the way
Vendor
on his haunches
Shit
Apples
cartloads, oranges
cartons
on the road
Apples & Oranges
January 12, 2009 · 15 Comments
Categories: Uncategorized
15 responses so far ↓
Nik // January 13, 2009 at 1:57 am |
Pollock made brush strokes redundant. You did the same with punctuations. You’ll make it big.
Nik // January 13, 2009 at 1:58 am |
*punctuation
Sigh. No edit option.
Dagny // January 13, 2009 at 7:56 am |
I am a Verbal instructor. Sigh! More Sigh!
Btw, the guilt trip seems to be working.
Nids // January 13, 2009 at 5:55 pm |
I like. Very brief, very to the point, and very funny, um.
Bharat Iyer // January 13, 2009 at 6:10 pm |
Nik: According to some people he also painted wallpaper.
*fingers crossed*
Lol, why do you even bother with typos?
Dagny: ‘llo again! Yeah? What exactly do you do in that capacity?
Yes, very well infact.
Nids: Yay.
That’s the idea, stripping it down to the bare minimum.
Dagny // January 13, 2009 at 9:38 pm |
Well! Well! Really don’t want to get into my professional life atleast here. :p In short, I run a website called http://www.totalgadha.com
The comment was regarding all the missing punctuations. ha ha!! Loved the poem.
Btw do check this one as a toast to brevity:
http://twentytwowords.com/
Bharat Iyer // January 13, 2009 at 10:16 pm |
Dagny: Hey, you brought it up.
I saw the website earlier, it could be of much use to me after a few years. 
Yes, I figured that. I just didn’t know what to respond with other than being inquisitive.
Good to know that. 
That blog is pretty good. Thanks for the link. Bookmarked for when I’m short on attention span.
Dagny // January 14, 2009 at 8:08 am |
Yes! The website is doing wonders and by the time you come for the prep, we’d have have covered every single topic.:)
You have an excellent collection on flickr, I’ll use the pics sometime on my blog and link back to you. Nevertheless, don’t forget to click donkeys if you ever happen to come across them .:P
Bharat Iyer // January 15, 2009 at 8:14 am |
Then I might actually have a chance in hell.
Thanks. Very flattered. Oh, I have pictures of me. Should suffice.
Amit // January 17, 2009 at 10:38 am |
A fighting poem. Very original!!
Bharat Iyer // January 20, 2009 at 1:12 pm |
Amit: Thanks!
Abhilasha // January 22, 2009 at 5:21 pm |
Hey. I like it.
It’s quite humorous.
When will I ever write something even remotely ‘funny’ ?
Sigh.
Bharat Iyer // January 23, 2009 at 3:10 pm |
Abhilasha: It’s interesting that people are finding it funny. That wasn’t what I had intended while writing it. Actually I had no intention while writing it. It’s great how every person is reading it differently.
I can’t write funny to save my life. It just happens inadvertently sometimes. Could happen to you too.
Abhilasha // January 26, 2009 at 4:19 pm |
Yeah. Maybe, someday.
Someday.
Sounds like I’m on my death bed. Eee.
Vasudha // February 15, 2009 at 11:02 am |
Nice poem. Beautifully done.
)
(I’m so jealous.